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The strength in my essays is my voice. I believe that voice is my strongest trait in writing because it has scored higher marks in both essays. Also, I am very proud because I scored a five on voice in one of my papers.

I think that there is a great need in strengthening my weaknesses, especially word choice,sentence fluency, organization, and quickly writing. Conventions is another trait that needs fortification. In my opinion, word choice is my most considerable weakness. In the scores that I received for word choice, it says, "colorful language seems forced" and "colorful language seems overdone". I agree with both of these because when I write I find that it is hardest to pick the words that I want to convey my messages with. Additionally, when I write I overuse the thesaurus. Another weakness of mine is sentence fluency. When I write, it seems as though all my sentences are the same length. Usually, this is between too long or medium sized, but they repeat these lengths throughout paragraphs. Finally, organization is another area that needs work. This is due to the obvious introductions and conclusions to my papers, poor transitions, and boring paper structures. The score for conventions has remained the same for my essays. Thus, meaning that I need to gain a better understanding on conventions, so that I can do raise the score for it. The essay on block days is a thing that I dread. I wish to improve this, so that I will be able to write well on block days and be proud of what I have written.

I am unsure of ideas because it improved between papers.