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=Task 1= = 1. (A) My main strength in the narrative essay is my voice. It really shines through in the essay and when reading it, people know it is me just from reading it. The audience is strongly present in my reading and people know how much my personality is shown. I also have strengths in sentence fluency and conventions. A thesaurus was used and so was a dictionary. = = (B) My main strength in the expository essay is most likely sentence fluency because they all flowed together relatively well. Although they could be improved, I think that they are the strong-suit of my expository essay. I received a 3 on my sentence fluency and I believe that it could be improved much more, even though it was probably the best trait in my paper. = (C) My main strength in the persuasive essay is most likely my conventions. There were few misspelled words and there were barely any grammatical errors. But, there was no corrections on my paper. The person just circled the number of the trait that they think I deserved and didn't tell me why they thought that.

2. (A) My main weakness in the narrative essay would most likely be my organization. The person believed that there was inconsistent structure and there were poorly placed details. They also said that the paragraphs didn't match with the thesis and I think i need to improve on the organization aspect. (B) My main weakness in the expository essay would most likely be my ideas. They were inconsistent throughout the paper. It lacked details and main ideas. I think that I could improve a lot on my consistency throughout the papers. (C) My main weakness in the persuasive essay would most likely be word choice. I didn't use a thesaurus and most of the words didn't match with what I was trying to say. I think I need to improve on my word choice in every essay and learn how to utilize a thesaurus more efficiently.

3. The goal I am setting in order to exceed AIMS is to practice more often and really try to exceed on my in and out of class essays. I think that if I consistently keep trying to get better and better, then I will become better by the time of AIMS and I will exceed.