Task+2

1. My strengths Persuasive: Ideas= My ideas were clear and covers almost every points. Organization= My intro, body and conclusions were obvious and I did a good job at directing my audience. Voice= My voice is expressing and engaging to the audience. Word Choice= I used a consistent tone, and was aware of my audience Sentence Fluency= Clear and flowed well Conventions= Few or no grammar mistakes Narrative: Ideas= Appropriate to the prompt Organization= Well sequenced with introduction and conclusion Voice= The reader can see me through the words, and was expressive Word Choice= good variety Sentence Fluency= Flowed well Conventions= Had control over point of view Expository: Ideas was appropriate and provided details. Organization is well formatted and had variety of transitions. The reader saw a glimpse of me, and it was appropriate for the style of writing. There are variety of word choice. The sentences flowed very well and there were control over them.

2. My weaknesses Persuasive: Sentences sometimes phrased awkward, and consistence of tenses was poor.

Narrative: Word choice is repeatable and fitted awkwardly sometimes in the paper.

Expository: Often uses topics that do not follow the prompt. Needs attention on heading and format.

3. I would like to improve on my writing scores. My goal would be to achieve the six traits scores of 4 and above. To reach these goals, I will listen closely in class and go over notes on tips of writing. I would work my best not just to pass AIMS, but to exceed it.