Martin, Isaiah

Circle 1: LIMBO

Circle 2: Lust

Circle 3: Gluttony



Circle 4: Misers and Spendthrifts

Circle 5: Anger

Circle 6: Heresy

Circle 7: Violence

Circle 8: Fraud

10/15/12

1. Isaiah Martin leads his kingdom into battle, and they fought like wimps. - 2 IC's (Isaiah leading his kingdom, and them being wimps.)

2. Isaiah agreed to take President's office because he would be famous. - 1 IC and 1 DC (Agreeing to take office, and because he was famous.)

3. 3) -Longer pause than a comma. -Joins IC with adverb to make compound and complex sentences -Commas have shorter pauses, but do have the same use 2) - I got my phone taken away, so don't text me. (A slight pause has better sentence fluency than a semi-colon.) - Should I be a bug, lion, or Jerry Seinfeld for Halloween? (a series is using the commas to separate the ideas.) 3) - I made sure to tread //carefully//; for the ice was thin. (wanted the readers to pay attention to the careful treading.)