Task+Two

Task 2 Today you will review your scores and remarks of your in class and out of class AIMS essays. In this reflection include the following: 1. Your strengths as a writer in persuasive, narrative, and expository essays. 2. Your weakness's as a writer in persuasive, narrative, and expository essays. 3. What goal are you setting for yourself as a writer in order to EXCEED AIMS? Any disrespectful comments, or EGO comments, will not be tolerated; you will recieve a ZERO.

1) I have a clear voice, and its prevalent in all of my essays. I also display the ability to clearly structure my essays. Another strength of mine is my ability to control my conventions. 2) Sometimes my purpose is overshadowed in my essays because of my focus on voice. also, my word choice needs improvement. Another weakness of mine is my sentence structure. I continue to use similarly structured sentences in my essays. Another apparent weakness is my sentence fluency, they do not flow together wall and occasionally choppy. 3) My goals include: improving my word choice significantly, as well as improving my sentence structures. I also think that although my voice is already prevalent it could be much better. In order to exceed i need to improve all of my essays. As of right now I a, receiving mainly fours, i would like to improve so much so that my work is publishable. I wish to improve in all subjects of the rubric: organization, ideas, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, and conventions.